Monday, August 5, 2019
Orangutan Animation
Hi Everyone,
For writing this term we are looking at persuasive language. This is an animation to persuade you that the orangutans need protecting. Their environment is being destroyed for the production of Palm Oil We can stop this by not buying products, that contain Palm oil. I would love it if I could receive some feedback :)
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Bella, Im Mak and I thought this was amazing! And I think it really proves that we shouldnt use palm oil. I also think that you dd a really good job. Maybe next time you can make sure its really obvious who is speaking? Keep up the good work.
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